Reflection on Draft Revision
7 12 2007When most people talk about revision they talk about rewording things here and there, or changing a few words or so. When I revise, I look at the whole paper and completly change things up. With my revision process, with every different draft I made a significant change weather it was changing ordering of paragraphs and sentences throughout the whole paper or completely taking whole sections of my paper out. For some reason I always felt like there was a mass amount that I should be changing. i feel that it is better this way because you are really changing it up, and making sure your sayin what you want to.





