e202f07ketchupman

After looking over a few things in my paper, i can just say right off the back. I’m not happy at all. I guess I got to the point of my paper that I was just stating things and not really worried about how it would flow. I realize that, in order to have a good paper, it’s not about how you want it to sound, it’s about how it’s suppose to sound (directed towards the type of teacher you have). Every teacher isn’t the same and in the past this paper would not have been a low C..but it is, in his eyes. But that is really, what all matters. So in doing this paper and thinking i put alot of work into it and trying to figure out where the paper stands. In the beginning, when i looked at the revision, i got upset and just wanted to start all over, but hey, i have no time for that, I believe with a little help and some serious looking over everything sooner or later will make sense. “It’s not like I’m the only one with this problem”. I know people all in my class probably feel this way, but hey, we have to adjust and just make due where it’s needed.
List of problems-
1. I really need to come up wit a better way of presenting my introduction
2. Stop with the run-on sentences
3. Be prepared for extra comments
4. Ask for help
5. Reevaluate my body of the paper.
6. Check Grammar and closely
7. (this should be first on my list but i’ll state it here) Organize my thoughts before even starting to type anymore. The things i have are very good, just not organized in order so that things link together and everything makes sense.
8. When i look at my paper, there is no conclusion…Basically…(WRITE ON)
9. MY OPINION MUST GO AT THE END OF THE PAPER..NOT THE BEGINNING!
10…ENOUGH OF THE WIKIPEDIA..I CAN DO BETTER~!